2020 IF Comp: Chorus
The writing throughout is elegant; it runs along well and I didn’t spot a single spelling or grammar issue.
I’d like more choices but the ones I made are major; clearly it is a direct-branching rather than a delayed-branching story, although there are elements along the way that alter the outcome too.
It was a shame the characters didn’t really interact (although I imagine that would have doubled or even quadrupled the amount of work—true branching stories like this are HARD).
I probably did quite badly as my short-term memory is very poor and I couldn’t remember names, let alone species or talents.
Some of it was a little disjointed.
I liked the way it indicated there are three possible endings, and gave a hint for getting a better ending.
This is a well-written game with a well-developed world, but it didn’t draw me in emotionally.
Three stars.
Felicity Banks 
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